tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post7974758260755520488..comments2023-05-03T12:33:58.086+03:00Comments on Hope...Never Runs Dry: Dinah's sorrow. (Short story)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07136093238140208543noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-4231486948001437102009-06-13T08:00:23.434+03:002009-06-13T08:00:23.434+03:00This story: Sad and well written
Hated the grief...This story: Sad and well written<br /><br />Hated the grief and emptiness it left but that's lifeEmi'shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04856426667161922467noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-58995511736646851052009-06-08T20:52:19.412+03:002009-06-08T20:52:19.412+03:00you writing tooooo. wowyou writing tooooo. wowluluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255176946096178944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-43474644414037009662009-06-08T11:26:52.547+03:002009-06-08T11:26:52.547+03:00This was fiction true, yet the circumstances are c...This was fiction true, yet the circumstances are commonplace in society. This is not exclusive to "balokole", it's really a dissatisfaction with the priorities sometimes men have.<br /><br />But back to believers...salvation applies to every area of life- let grace reign.<br /><br />Princess: Now I want to go...what? Yo beefing? I hope not. <br /><br />Erique: it's not a novel, it was as short as I could manage.<br /><br />I think juxtaposition is a nice literary trick too.<br /><br />Kati mubisi gwa nguki, chic has own mind...maybe she is praying for God to restore their marriage. Hmm?<br /><br />Ate scare me off...are you saying I cheat on you?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07136093238140208543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-36830657357398832902009-06-08T01:34:39.025+03:002009-06-08T01:34:39.025+03:00Abt Lantene ask Eizzy i think she goes for it....
...Abt Lantene ask Eizzy i think she goes for it....<br /><br />Naye you if dude was so saved why was he cheating on his wife....me if i were here i would ask him to watch "dairy of a mad black woman"....<br /><br />nela babe is patient me i would be like "i want out, i want out" you so dont leave me in the delievery room...lol...<br /><br />Hi hun, how are you ..? hope this doesnt scare you offUgandan girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14745963052034847469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-63496549036120109352009-06-07T22:59:38.493+03:002009-06-07T22:59:38.493+03:00moving story...i think it's fictious; great na...moving story...i think it's fictious; great narrative, gripping..i too love that juxtaposition at the end...good stuff<br /><br />i hear u princessSleekhttp://sleekandwild.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-17711550330185129722009-06-05T15:58:09.610+03:002009-06-05T15:58:09.610+03:00Sometimes Christianity isn't as easy as is pre...Sometimes Christianity isn't as easy as is preached....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07136093238140208543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-36585501356292236842009-06-05T12:31:47.712+03:002009-06-05T12:31:47.712+03:00It's a touching story. I like the juxtapositio...It's a touching story. I like the juxtapositions as she prepares to bring the baby to the world.Mintynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-28460737919753261092009-06-05T10:38:12.721+03:002009-06-05T10:38:12.721+03:00@ apprentice: Maybe I wasn't very clear. I am ...@ apprentice: Maybe I wasn't very clear. I am not trifling the pain of this girl's mother. What I am deploring is her husband's behaviour.<br /><br />"This time the pain consumed her and she screamed.<br /><br />"Push woman, he is coming! Push!"<br /><br />At their home, in their bed, he was screaming too. She knew it."<br /><br />While she gives birth to the son he so badly wanted, her husband is off sleeping with another woman--on their marital bed, no less! This is what I am referring to as 'misuse of the woman.'Dinah is being misused, disrespected, mis-loved! Her husband is obviously cheating. What leapt out at me was the immediate tragedy--the raw pain. Losing 7 children was tough on her mother, but Dinah is the main character of the story, no?<br /><br />*I hope I have expressed myself marginally better in this lengthy comment. :)Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07216928001562967888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-19365217953105007402009-06-05T10:21:42.527+03:002009-06-05T10:21:42.527+03:00Fabulous story. A true tradegy. I have seen with m...Fabulous story. A true tradegy. I have seen with my own eyes many a marriage story as such. If it's a true story, I pray God will heal it. Great writing and narrative. I love it.<br /><br />@Princess: This has nothing 2do with cheating men or misused women.Your perception of the story seems a little skewed.I don't believe it's easy for any man(or woman for that matter)to endure a loss of 7 babies and stick it thru. Thats what he should've done but it aint easy without the power of God.the apprenticehttp://mastersapprentice.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-22412368626961044422009-06-05T07:27:31.290+03:002009-06-05T07:27:31.290+03:00You call this a short story?You call this a short story?Eriquehttp://rentedmess.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-10919864852516881532009-06-04T23:34:09.625+03:002009-06-04T23:34:09.625+03:00Now you want to go to the lantern meet? Haha. Talk...Now you want to go to the lantern meet? Haha. Talk to Spartakuss/ King/ Streetsider.<br /><br />I don't like this story. Cheating men/ women misused. :(<br />But well-writ.Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07216928001562967888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26110594.post-59542651990178638092009-06-04T20:26:28.561+03:002009-06-04T20:26:28.561+03:00Nice, deep and true - I can't tell you how man...Nice, deep and true - I can't tell you how many people I know who have experienced/ are experiencing this. But God ALWAYS delivers the faithful.<br /><br />(I don't know what Lantern is, so I can't help)Mrs.Ohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13331617474932229335noreply@blogger.com